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Hey everyone! For the past month or so I've been working a project inspired by raysox's incredible British Gridiron League and I've finally gotten things to a point where I'd like to share. I'd love to get any feedback you all have on these designs before I make things official and post elsewhere, like on Behance and stuff.
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Super cool to see a unique new concept series! I really like the league logo.
The Samarai are cool. They remind me a bit of those classic Buccaneers teams in the best way. I think the logo is really solid. The two bottom sides of the cape not being the same threw me a bit but it's growing on me. Still wonder if they were both red it would feel more connected. Regardless I dig it. I do wonder if the gold is just a tad too dark for the color scheme but it's really only prominently on the helmet logo so maybe it's not a problem. The NJ Generals had a brighter red to offset if I recall. It does have that older established 90's feel, so maybe it's perfect for what you're going for. I think the helmet design is super cool and unique! Definitely a cool team. Great start!
Can't wait to see more!
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Steelman wrote:
Super cool to see a unique new concept series! I really like the league logo.
The Samarai are cool. They remind me a bit of those classic Buccaneers teams in the best way. I think the logo is really solid. The two bottom sides of the cape not being the same threw me a bit but it's growing on me. Still wonder if they were both red it would feel more connected. Regardless I dig it. I do wonder if the gold is just a tad too dark for the color scheme but it's really only prominently on the helmet logo so maybe it's not a problem. The NJ Generals had a brighter red to offset if I recall. It does have that older established 90's feel, so maybe it's perfect for what you're going for. I think the helmet design is super cool and unique! Definitely a cool team. Great start!
Can't wait to see more!
Thanks a ton! The colors could probably use some tweaking - the primary monitor I work on is a really high-quality one, so I can end up making decisions that don't work as well on other screens. I'm pretty sure the red was selected to match the shade on the Japanese flag, but looking back I agree it should probably be a little brighter. I'll post updates after I share all 12 teams!
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The Sharks are definitely modern, sort of oddly minimalist despite the cool shark fin. It's a solid look. Why do I love a good gradient in my old age? That yellow-orange is nice. The Sharks sort of remind me of a cross between the new Texans set and the Jaguars, if they could ever get their ish together. My only quibble is I don't really like the back of the helmet, just feels like too much teal back there. Maybe if the wave crested at a lower point. I think the jersey number stokes might be a tad heavy compared to the rest of the design. But that's super minor stuff. The whole monochrome thing and word marks fit the modern vibes really well. They feel like a team my little brother would love, in the best way, so I think you nailed it.
I'm guessing you're just doing team identities, but I'm hooked now so more details would be cool later! Like field designs, stadium information, etc. Looking forward to the next one.
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Steelman wrote:
The Sharks are definitely modern, sort of oddly minimalist despite the cool shark fin. It's a solid look. Why do I love a good gradient in my old age? That yellow-orange is nice. The Sharks sort of remind me of a cross between the new Texans set and the Jaguars, if they could ever get their ish together. My only quibble is I don't really like the back of the helmet, just feels like too much teal back there. Maybe if the wave crested at a lower point. I think the jersey number stokes might be a tad heavy compared to the rest of the design. But that's super minor stuff. The whole monochrome thing and word marks fit the modern vibes really well. They feel like a team my little brother would love, in the best way, so I think you nailed it.
I'm guessing you're just doing team identities, but I'm hooked now so more details would be cool later! Like field designs, stadium information, etc. Looking forward to the next one.
I'm glad you like them! The Sharks are a team that I in real life wouldn't be a fan of, but I felt I needed to have that kind of team represented here, haha. Thanks for the notes! I agree, I'll definitely be making those tweaks when I revise them. And I actually meant to do field designs but I was so excited to post that they slipped my mind. I'll have that and more when I do revisions!
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I really like the first trio
Really like that Samurai helmet, and they seem to go hand in hand with the classic feel that you wanted.
Sharks, really unique look on that helmet, the orange really pops in all the applications.
The Frost, I like it..they'd probably be my team...but I am craving more of that Powder blue.
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