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awesome job on the hawks! you managed to take an identity that feels kinda lost in the sauce and turn it completely around while keeping it tied to the existing brand recognition. the green and gold works really well, the new font is great (despite some of the weird quirks in the numbers) and while I'm not as sold on the hawk logo itself as you clearly are, it's also a huge improvement over what they have
albirex is a weird name that would take some getting used to for me, but I like what you've done with the branding! you mentioned the logo feels like the yankees (and I agree) but everything else feels like the mets, which is a compliment despite the mets being, you know, the mets. quick point about the logo: I can only see it as an IM. I get how it's trying to be an NA but it's just not. it'd be a great logo for inner mongolia or something. given the origins of the name it'd be fun to try a swan with a crown? still, I think this is a huge improvement over anything this team has given us irl, great work
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awesome job on the hawks! you managed to take an identity that feels kinda lost in the sauce and turn it completely around while keeping it tied to the existing brand recognition. the green and gold works really well, the new font is great (despite some of the weird quirks in the numbers) and while I'm not as sold on the hawk logo itself as you clearly are, it's also a huge improvement over what they have
albirex is a weird name that would take some getting used to for me, but I like what you've done with the branding! you mentioned the logo feels like the yankees (and I agree) but everything else feels like the mets, which is a compliment despite the mets being, you know, the mets. quick point about the logo: I can only see it as an IM. I get how it's trying to be an NA but it's just not. it'd be a great logo for inner mongolia or something. given the origins of the name it'd be fun to try a swan with a crown? still, I think this is a huge improvement over anything this team has given us irl, great work
Thanks! I understand where you're coming from with the logo, I read it as an IM at first as well. I can give an alternate cap logo a try, though!
The Ventures will be up soon!



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This whole series has been fantastic!
I'm sorry for not commenting until now, I just haven't had any critiques to make lol. I've agreed with pretty much all of the changes you've made and love the amount of dedication, thought, and research you put into each design. This has truly been one of my favorite baseball design series ever and I couldn't ask for a better introduction to Japanese baseball.
Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to these last two teams!



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Section30 wrote:
This whole series has been fantastic!
I'm sorry for not commenting until now, I just haven't had any critiques to make lol. I've agreed with pretty much all of the changes you've made and love the amount of dedication, thought, and research you put into each design. This has truly been one of my favorite baseball design series ever and I couldn't ask for a better introduction to Japanese baseball.
Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to these last two teams!
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed so far and that I was comprehensive enough with my team introductions, haha.
Shikoku will be up soon!



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Love that shade of orange and the "Mandarin Pirates" name is great!



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Section30 wrote:
Love that shade of orange and the "Mandarin Pirates" name is great!
Thanks! I agree, the orange is a really appealing shade.


