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Steelman wrote:
Ah yes, Ti-gers my beloved. Honestly no notes. I like the fourth jersey, it feels more professional than their other attempts...honestly that 2021 alternate is... wow. Great set!
Oh yeah, it's real rough. Their 2023 alt was not much better.Â
The Giants will be up soon!
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you've been putting out some some great stuff recently, and it's a shame nobody's commented on it. lemme change that!
lions: I like the double blue for them a lot. not feeling the font - I don't like the way it zags to the left, it's just weird - but it's their existing wordmark, so I can't really fault you for that. other than that, it's a classic look, feels very baseball, and the throwback is nice
tigers: not much to go on here, but I think the new shade of yellow is significantly better and the tiger stripes on the fourth are great. the wordmarks are once again a little weird but I don't think you can change them in this case. one change I would suggest would be to add a cap for the third with a single-color HT. feels like it would fit the jersey betterbears, oh my!
giants: again, not a ton here, but the new shade of orange is sooo much better and the logo feels more yomiuri giants. it all just feels yomiuri giants. nicely done
marines: now this is an upgrade. the jerseys look much nicer (and less white sox-y) with the single layer scripts on the home and road. I adore the magenta alt, that might be my favorite jersey you've posted so far. the chiba vice set is a lot of fun too, and imo significantly better than most of their attempts
baystars: now this is an even bigger upgrade. your take on the brand feels like it has so much more life than the original. the color scheme is great, although it's kinda similar to the lions, and I wish there was a little more of that yellow-gold to differentiate them. I had the same thought with the away uniform, since saitama uses navy on the road, it'd be nice to see them go with the lighter blue, but on the other hand, I really like the alt and I don't think it would work as well with the colors reversed. overall I think this is your best work yet
swallows: I like the navy and green a lot! clearly this proves that blue and green is a viable color scheme :​) the drop shadow works really well with this set too. the fourth is yet another banger - I just think maybe the numbers could be a little bit bolder to match the wordmark. love the colors, though, and the clouds are really well done
buffaloes: not feeling this one, but that's mostly the fault of the existing brand, which you didn't really change. there are just too many outlines, especially for such a complex blackletter font, and I've never understood the Fs in the script. I will say the improvements you made to the color scheme, and road and third jerseys are definitely better - I'm with you that the buffs feel more like a black and gold team than a blue and gold team
eagles: this is a great set that keeps the same vibe the eagles have had and takes it up a notch. the new logo and wordmarks are such great modernizations of the existing concept, and it all looks great in both red and green. the fauxback is, honestly, a good bit, but it looks great too. this is just what the golden eagles should be wearing
hopefully that sated your critique appetite! can't wait for you to post (japanese baseball pun) the next team
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ItDoesntMatter wrote:
you've been putting out some some great stuff recently, and it's a shame nobody's commented on it. lemme change that!
lions: not feeling the font - I don't like the way it zags to the left, it's just weird - but it's their existing wordmark, so I can't really fault you for that.Â
tigers: one change I would suggest would be to add a cap for the third with a single-color HT. feels like it would fit the jersey better
baystars: I wish there was a little more of that yellow-gold to differentiate them. I had the same thought with the away uniform, since saitama uses navy on the road, it'd be nice to see them go with the lighter blue, but on the other hand, I really like the alt and I don't think it would work as well with the colors reversed.Â
swallows: the fourth is yet another banger - I just think maybe the numbers could be a little bit bolder to match the wordmark.Â
buffaloes: not feeling this one, but that's mostly the fault of the existing brand, which you didn't really change. there are just too many outlines, especially for such a complex blackletter font, and I've never understood the Fs in the script.Â
hopefully that sated your critique appetite! can't wait for you to post (japanese baseball pun) the next team
Thanks so much for your comments! Lemme respond to your critiques:
Lions: I agree that the font is kind of strange but it's also charming to me in a way? It's mostly the cap logo that I like from the real-world set, it's very satisfying.Â
Tigers: Yep, agreed. Not sure how I didn't think of that.
BayStars: Ironically, I redid the BayStars and Lions brands to try and separate them but they ended up sort of blurring together again. When I posted the team I was a little surprised at just how little gold I ended up using, but it's like you said: the alt works much better as a light blue jersey than a navy one. Looking back, I could probably swap white in the stripes for gold.
Swallows: Funnily enough, I'm certain that's the exact same font, the 11 is just a particularly thin number.Â
Buffaloes: I think it's totally fair to not like the Buffaloes' current logo package, but like the Lions, it has a bit of charm to me. It's probably the Olde English B cap logo that convinced me to keep it.
So glad you've been enjoying the series so far! The Hawks will be up soon.



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